Sunday, November 27, 2011

Social Awarnes #3

Crying for help,
Help only comes if someone helps,
I am hurt
Lies to cover up the pain,
Dark wherever I am,

A new hope,
Back on my feet,
U helped heal me back to the world of normal,
Still need help but,
Everything seems to be better now thanks to your help.

In this poem i had written issues of child abuse in the first word child and then in the second word i had what the change is if the problem is stopped. i got the idea out of nowhere really i thought that it would be an interesting way to write a poem about child abuse so i wrote it and in my opinion i think it came out well.

SOCIAL AWARNESS #2

In my book the child called "it" the problem is child abuse and so my main cahracter is the only one of his family to be abused of the siblings. For some starnge reason I still don't quite get why he is the only one of the family to be abused, and because of this why is no one helping him not even his father who should be able to stop the main characters mom from abusing him anymore. But because of the fact that the moms abuse is so intense that the rest of them back off just so that they don't go through the same thing as the main character. A possible solution that does eventually come up is when the nurse of the main characters school conducts the yearly check up and sees all of the gashes, cuts, bruises, adn scars that he has all over the body. Soon after though however child services comes into the picture and save the boy from his mother, by this turn of events that saves the character now he can finally live a normal life as a regular kid with a normal childhood.

Monday, November 21, 2011

Two voice poem

It's hard
to get good grades whenever I need them
when my boss beats me when I mess up my job

What I need
A new Ipod because my old one broke
food, water and somewhere to live

What I want
Some new sneakers because my old ones are starting to look a bit dirty
A safe place to live  and somewhere to learn

Who helps
my sister does all the time with my math homework
noone igth now i have no clue where my three brothers and sisters are but they're probably working to

Sunday, November 20, 2011

Social action writing #1

Racism there is plenty wrong with it here are some of them:
-making fun of people because of their color
-their skin
-their culture
-who they are
-how they act because of who they are
This is all wrong because people don't understand how bad they are hurting other people when they insult them because of their skin, culture, and where you're from affects how you act. But still people do it sometimes it is because they have experienced this hate before so they let their anger out of being hated and hurt other people. i think this might be what causes it, but it could be caused just because a person doesn't understand how bad it feels to be made fun of through racism. Whats wrong with racism? plenty for example, the hurt feelings of others but also two different groups of people can begin to battle with one another for whose the better man or woman this the wrong thing about racism.
There aren't many solutions that i can see to this problem because of how many times you tell people that were all equal and yet they still question it even though in reality we are all the same organisms with few unique characteristics. 
Some solutions that i think of however are to try to prevent people from doing this by proving the idea that we  are all the same type of organism just that all of us have different genes and unique characteristics.

Wednesday, November 16, 2011

MORE ON BLOOD NINJA

So far in the book my character right from the start has a plate load of problems all the way from being a vampire to his father being dead, apparently though in order to become a ninja you must first become a vampire or rather how my character prefers to call them Kyuuketsuki which means vampire. because of him however being turned without training first he will have no choice now but to live the life of a ninja. Thats all i have so far so don't worry folks I'll keep you informed on what goes on in the book as i continue to read it.

BLOOD NINJA

In this book that I've recently started reading, the book made me tear through the pages because of all the action that the book started with as soon as the character just started explaining who he was, this is what brought me in. However before this even happened the books starts off with a introduction filled with action and suspense. Overall, I think that this book is great because of how it has the main character Tao and his "brother" Hiro start their adventure off with a battle that takes place by battling ninjas to the death. in my opinion i think that this book would be great for people who enjoy books with plenty of action because this book is one book that comes with plenty of adventure and action.